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February 12, 2012
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My mindnight mathematics,
Pathological solution,
My mental acrobatics,
A silent resolution,
My broken numismatics,
Dead distribution,
My over-done dramatics,
A persisting pollution.
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Best poem I have written in a while.
About thinking things through late at night.

22.Feb.12.
This is now my most viewed deviation!
I much prefer this over my old most viewed, [link]
This one is more 'my style'.
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~PearlsCat Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm horrible at math. But I really, really liked this poem. I'm impressed that it rhymed so well, and the vocabulary doesn't bog it down like I thought it would. Overall, it's clever. Very, very clever. I applaud you, good sir.
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~IPaintRainbows Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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*SilverWynd Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I really like this. Very cool and original
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~IPaintRainbows Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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~Mew-Mew-adict Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The title is just excellent, as well as the last line. The imargery and word limbo is awesome, as a small critique it is rather vague as to what it refers to but it is short and sweet. Nice work! 8D
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~IPaintRainbows Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your comments + critiques! I will take them into account for my future work! :heart:
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~Mew-Mew-adict Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :P
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The flow here is very nice; it really rolls off the tongue nicely. :3
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~IPaintRainbows May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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*FallingAsleepTonight Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Flows very nicely :)
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